Other Author 2

Book cover - Chris Davis - No Regrets
NO REGRETS COVER

This author is a friend. He has KDP published stories on Amazon and other sites. One is No Regrets. You can find it at:

http://www.amazon.com/No-Regrets-Christopher-Davis-ebook/dp/B00F30O3PA/ref=sr_1_8?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1423080734&sr=1-8&keywords=Christopher+Davis+Kindle

Brief Bio for Chris …….
Chris Davis is a central California native. Long a reader of history, he was captivated by the US Civil War while living near Gettysburg Pennsylvania in the mid 90’s. Becoming a Civil War reenactor soon after transferring back to California in 2001, that time period soon found its way into his writing.
Normally writing in the typical genre fiction style of Crime / Thriller, the first short story Among Us Soldiers appeared while writing a short Civil War novel ‘Fire on the Mountain’ [unpublished].
Chris’s Amazon Author page is at:

http://www.amazon.com/Christopher-Davis/e/B008I8VTDI/ref=ntt_athr_dp_pel_1

Tim’s book also:

THE DOC ~ Revised Edition
Copyright © 2014 by Tim Desmond
Cover Design by Jackson Cover Design
All cover art copyright © 2014
All Rights Reserved
Print ISBN: 978-1-626941-44-1

Timothy J. Desmond
Amazon author page at: http://www.amazon.com/-/e/B00694KQQO
The Doc page and Writing at: http://timothydesmond.wordpress.com
Art at: http://artbydesmond.wordpress.com

Not Murder but a Conundrum

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Aneta Cruz

This is the last of the Blog Tour interviews with different questions from Aneta Cruz. While I sent this out on Facebook, this is my official reference for everyone to hop over to the CONUNDRUM CORNER. While there you can have a view and perhaps pick up one or two of her books from a most talented and moving author.
http://conundrumcorner.blogspot.com/2014/07/interview-with-tim-desmond.html

Thank you Aneta, for having me on your site.

Tim

Timothy J. Desmond

Blog at: https://timdesmondblog.wordpress.com
Book Page at: http://timothydesmond.wordpress.com
Amazon author page at: http://www.amazon.com/-/e/B00694KQQO
Art at: http://artbydesmond.wordpress.com

First Novels

Art - Novel Spaces cropped for blog

“First Novels” is the topic of the article over at Novel Spaces. Thank you Liane Spicer for the guest spot. This is possibly the next to last of the current “Blog Tour” pieces that have been posted during the past eight weeks. This isn’t long, but it is different as it is not a question and answer, Q & A format. It is a short blog article on “First Novels.”
If you have not been there before, it is a marvelous and wonderful site with 208 member writers and authors. Hop over to Novel Spaces at:
http://novelspaces.blogspot.com
Timothy J. Desmond

Blog at: https://timdesmondblog.wordpress.com
Book Page at: http://timothydesmond.wordpress.com
Amazon author page at: http://www.amazon.com/-/e/B00694KQQO
Art at: http://artbydesmond.wordpress.com

The BIG EASY Blog Tour

Author Tierney James, thank you for having me introduced on your site last week. I appreciate your help and it is also my pleasure to help authors on their new releases.
Author Tierney James

For those out there reading this I am thanking Tierney James at :
http://www.ptierneyjames.blogspot.com

And, yes, she talked me into this. Here is her brief bio:
“I am a life-long learner so I read a variety of books. Today I might study Tibet and tomorrow I’ll plunge myself into the world of geo-politics or how to be a better writer. My passion for gardening, travel and books will keep me in the poor house. Nothing is more important to me than God, family and country. I’m a pro-military person and pretty conservative in my politics.”
Tierney James interviewed me for this BIG EASY BLOG TOUR by asking these questions:
1) What Are you working on?

TD -What got tabled while in second round of editing of The Doc novel was a new novel about a frustrated high school physics teacher. The premise is that he has a theory in his area, physics, and, you’ll laugh at this, he can’t get published. He has tons of troubles with juggling classroom demands, marital problems, faculty issues, administrative problems. The students are great but much of the school problems lead to a legal situation. All the time he is trying to solve and prove his theory in order to write a better paper and get published. Some of that revolves around a paranormal incident.
Tabled also was a sequel to the The Doc book just released. And, I am trying to do more painting.

2) How does your work differ from others of its genre?

TD – I don’t claim to be a genre expert, or suspense thriller expert as the publisher labeled the novel. I was calling it conspiracy thriller. As I have passed on the advice given to me such as “genres have rules,” one needs to be aware of that while trying to be different. And that is tough, trying to be original. The Doc has a lot of the subculture of Civil War re-enacting in it. There has been re-enactors in movies like Sweet Home Alabama and other books like Tishomingo Blues by the late Elmore Leonard, and South of Shiloh by Chuck Logan. In both books a killing is done at a re-enactment during a battle. I wanted to depict the Civil War re-enactment in different way and a major way how important it was, or is, for the characters. My main character is a medical doctor who is also a shooting sports enthusiast, pilot, and re-enactor. He is not a cop, not an agent, not a political guy.
There are many stereotypes out there. So, I believe that my main characters to be somewhat different from those in other thrillers.
3) Why do you write what you do?

TD – This goes back to my first interest in writing and that was in art school in the sixties. I look at writing as another form of art. But, I had a terrible time writing anything. Taking some courses helped, but I never got beyond short stories and poetry until 1979. Even then, a novel attempt was a good learning thing. I did it to a finished state, but was terrible after three years.
Later, I kept getting ideas for a larger work while writing short stories. I think I write because I still believe it is an art form, with rules. The rules are like a puzzle. The puzzle can be abstract, and move around. I try to be original without being “so out there” that “nobody gets it.”

4) How does your writing process work?

TD – I have files of story ideas that are jotted down on post-its, or other paper notes. Some are on 8.5 x 11 sheets and others on lose leaf binder paper. I usually do a draft of an idea that I turn into an outline. The draft might be in a single 3 ring spiral notebook. Too, I’ve borrowed interesting author’s methods. Hemingway typed standing at dresser, as depicted in the recent story about Martha Gelhorn. But he said that he “typed dialog” because it was more like “real conversations.” I must have read that forty years ago. Then I read an article about the collaboration of the screenwriter and author of “L.A. Confidential” James Elroy. Elroy wrote everything long hand, in spiral notebooks. So, I like to write longhand too. What I found was that when you put the long hand version, chapter, or section, into the computer files, it is a self edited draft stage of whatever you are working on.
In 1999 I began outlining more, then moving things around. I know there are many “pantsers” who write a first draft, “from the heart,” as said by others, no plot, and along the rationale of NaNoWriMo philosophy of knocking out that first 50,000 words like that. And, then the idea is to rewrite “from the head” plotting or editing.
The Doc was from an outline of mine. Actually it was from a 1999 screenplay that went nowhere. I had read, back then, an article in Writers magazine, “Write your screenplay in 90 days.” So, I followed the steps. The interesting thing was the clear rules that were outlined. I took an idea I had and began. But it took me more than the ninety days. It took me eighteen months.
The Physics Theory [working title] story is a “pantser” method. But, that is unfinished and has major plotting problems to solve, just like the sorry-bastard-protagonist’s problems. Maybe it’s because I don’t know what I am doing. I have to recheck the rules, or reshuffle the deck of note cards.

Thank you Tierney James for this blog-A-thon of sorts. I am looking for three other authors who have an interest in the BIG EASY BLOG TOUR. You may email me at: bobbitimdesmond@att.net for details.

Is Anybody There?

Blog – Is Anybody There?

About a writer’s time and writer’s following, there was a similar blog recently on another writer site, SHE WRITES. Also this is NaNoWriMo – for November 2012. I jumped in and I am very behind in my word number/stats department. Too, I have a blog here, but I have not blogged in weeks. No excuses…… am just not there. One thing about the promotions and the readership, another recent tip came up that makes sense. I am following half dozen writer sites if not more, so can’t remember the origin, but the tip is to WRITE COMMENTS IN THE BOX, not just click on the LIKE button. This may have come from a Facebook tip, as the rational was that there is so much traffic, that just a LIKE does not get forwarded or sent to all on a person’s or “others” friend or member list.” One writer, blogger, editor friend has mentioned this also with regard to writer sites. Log on and introduce yourself.

And it may be a reality that has been mentioned too, it takes time to build a “following.” It has surprised me how my friends list and followers list has grown, yet I still am not completely sure if that translates to “buyers” or “sells.” Check out KLOUT and LinkedIn.

I am still looking around out there….. “mike in hand”….. fingers at the keys ….. “Is anybody there?”

Timothy J. Desmond
THE DOC, ebook conspiracy thriller novel at
http://amazon.com
SWIM THE RED RIVER short story at

http://www.amazon.com/Swim-River-Short-Fiction-ebook/dp/B008BHPCNY/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1339948726&sr=1-1&keywords=swim+the+red+river
 http://timsfiction-art.com
http://xoxopublishing.com

Tim’s Amazon author page at: http://www.amazon.com/-/e/B00694KQQO

Critiques

Critiques.

Most writers don’t get critiqued enough. True some critiques do cut you, like some reviews. I think KIRKUS reviews can say one’s writing is “shit” in hundreds of ways, some subtle some not, as in from “dross” to “mind dump.” Most critiques are in the vein of what works and what doesn’t work. In a writing class once, a fellow’s short story was about a scene in Vietnam, and then in the dialogue the character used the term “gook” in referring to VC enemy. The critic thought it was distasteful. I’m sure the writer felt his character was true in that dialogue, and while he did not argue, some classroom peer/novice advice has to be weighed.

This came up in another blog site about the value of critiques. See: http://nhwn.wordpress.com/2012/07/19/on-receiving-critique/#comments

It really is invaluable and a learning thing. That’s why local workshops are so important too, not just the conference breakout sessions.

Basic Plots

Basic Plots

The topic was the seven basic plots.

Overcoming a Monster, Voyage and return, Comedy, Tragedy, Rebirth, Rags to riches. There were many good comments and if you wish to read those and the original reference blog on the forum, see: http://limebirduk.wordpress.com/2012/06/25/basic-plots/#comment-775

This got my attention straight away. It is endlessly interesting to me as a struggling wordsmith since 1964. Language use aside, I read of these seven items several years back. And if memory still serves me, the list I read was the basic “plots of Shakespeare.” And even if so, or not, the truths are there. Look how we are endlessly captured and entertained by the creative variations – indeed multitudes of variations and inventiveness of applying the basic plots. I believe it goes to, or comes to, format, design of, structure of the story. Then after that, one adds to the “structure” one’s individual characters, new scenes, colors, senses, and problems and solutions. There’s no “law” to break. At the beginning one creates their own structure. And, even if one believes that they create the structure at the end of their work, no matter, because what is on the previous pages has its own design …. good or bad.

Timothy J. Desmond
THE DOC, ebook conspiracy thriller novel at
http://amazon.com
SWIM THE RED RIVER short story at

http://www.amazon.com/Swim-River-Short-Fiction-ebook/dp/B008BHPCNY/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1339948726&sr=1-1&keywords=swim+the+red+river
 http://timsfiction-art.com
http://xoxopublishing.com

Short fiction revival

 A recent  writer blog noted that some or many bloggers do put their own fiction on their blog site and  do not have the fees and costs of a website. Therefore, they are getting their short stories or poems out there for others to read. He suggested instead, we should offer our short fiction on an e-book format venue like Amazon’s Kindle version. The rational twofold: One, to get paid for the work instead of giving it away on a blog. And, two, that newe, younger, e-readers who are on the go with their smart phones, Macbooks, notebooks, and ipads will rather read “shorter” works. Perhaps many of you are already doing this. See Amazon’s publishing site:

http://www.amazon.com/gp/seller-account/mm-summary-page.html?ie=UTF8&ld=AZFooterSelfPublish&topic=200260520

 

In previous decades, back to the 50s and 60s, there were a large number of print outlets for short stories. They were paying magazines. Those markets have diminished as the print industry magazines have folded The ones I am referring to were the largest of their day like Colliers, Look, and Saturday Evening Post. The others were niche markets like Argosy and men’s magazines. . And even for some magazines that are still going, that once published fiction, no longer do. One example is the men’s sporting or hunting magazines. Their stories are all non-fiction. Womens’ magazines like Redbook and Cosmopolitan may still publish short stories as well as Playboy and the New Yorker. A huge one is the Atlantic Monthly.

Regional journals are still out there. Some have ceased to exist. Glimmer Train in Portland Oregon is still with us. I think Amelia in Bakersfield is gone. The point is that the numbers of these markets has declined.

My observation is that most young readers and the general public do not read short stories. So, maybe, short fiction can revive on the e-markets. On believing this premise I have jumped in with a short story on Kindle. SWIM THE RED RIVER is there now. Kindle will still call it a book. http://www.amazon.com/Swim-River-Short-Fiction-ebook/dp/B008BHPCNY/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1339948726&sr=1-1&keywords=swim+the+red+river
Some of you may reject the notion that short fiction is “not” being read.

But if one believes otherwise, do you believe that e-markets can revive short fiction?.

Timothy J. Desmond
THE DOC, ebook conspiracy thriller novel at
http://amazon.com
SWIM THE RED RIVER short story at

http://www.amazon.com/Swim-River-Short-Fiction-ebook/dp/B008BHPCNY/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1339948726&sr=1-1&keywords=swim+the+red+river
 http://timsfiction-art.com
http://xoxopublishing.com

Tim’s Amazon author page at: http://www.amazon.com/-/e/B00694KQQO

Blog delay ……….

Sorry about the last nine days of gap here. On the topic of being overwhelmed ………….

In a COMMENT TO ANOTHER BLOGGER Eloise Currie at http://emcmemoir.wordpress.com/2012/05/15/social-media-writing-and-keeping-up-with-it-all/

On the subject of being overwhelmed: Yes, this is my problem too, and it really strikes a nerve. One thinks that one is organized, and then BANG. One has to drop all plans. I’ve taken to writing memos to myself on phone “memo app” – as I get blog ideas, and also novel scene thoughts; then later, on reflection, everything I’ve thought of seems so trite. Ages ago, one English/writer instructor lectured about “concentration.” His view was that “concentration” meant “taking breaks” then “getting back to the work” …. the breaks could be days, weeks. But, in the end, his point was “keeping at it.” This was from the late Malcolm Wood, English instructor emeritus California College of Arts & Crafts and UC Berkeley. So, yes, overwhelmed, but trying to stay at it.

The problem is not new, evidently. Samuel Clemens wrote of the problem of newspaper editors.

“How editors can continue this tremendous labor, this exhausting consumption of brain fiber (for their work is creative, and not a mere mechanical laying up of facts, like reporting), day after day, year after year, is incomprehensible.” Mark Twain.

Timothy J. Desmond
THE DOC, ebook conspiracy thriller novel at
http://amazon.com
http://timsfiction-art.com
http://xoxopublishing.com

NaNoWriMo

On replying to another blog post on NaNoWriMo, That is National Novel Writing Month, where you write your 50,000 word novel in 30 days. The other blogger said she got into it and was different, and driving her nuts, and she then had to do some prep work before continuing, and so on, in that way. Maybe some of you are seeing and reading that too. I commented: “Read this with interest, as I wanted to do the NaNoWriMo thing also after reading the book on the subject, before going to the website. I found the book by accident in a “Home Goods” store. So, I thought it was an omen.  I really appreciate all you said about your prep stuff. However, my understanding of the NaNoWriMo concept is that you can do all that after you knock out the 30 day 50,000 word version. As the title of the little book is: NO PLOT? NO PROBLEM. So, it’s only a technique thing anyway. I came across last week a writer’s argument about whether one works from an outline or not. So, that’s it. If one is going to do the NaNoWriMo, as intended, forget the prep.”